An Honest Critique

A Bear Photo by Matthias Goetzke on Unsplash

Brown Bear winced as the cast hit the last note of the closing number. “Okay, okay. Hmm, let’s see, I took some notes most of which you’re better off not seeing. And when I wasn’t taking notes I was doodling on the page and those are still easier to look at than some of your scenes. But it’s not all bad news, I’ve got even worse, so here goes.”

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